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ART by dot-Silver ART by dot-Silver
Cinema4D & Photoshop.

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First I have to say I like this a lot. I like the simplicity of it, and the simple, bright colour scheme, and the feeling of freshness it has.

I think if I were to change this, I would want to make the shadows a little deeper around the A (and possibly a little lighter on the T) - the A looks a little flat to me in comparison to the other letters. I like most of the bugs, and I really like the little reptile peaking around the T, but the butterfly looks a little too flat for my tastes. Either I would try to change the perspective of the wings a bit in photoshop, or go foor a different butterfly, perhaps with wings slightly more together, perching on the top edge of the T if that makes sense.

My other nitpick would be the leaves, I would like to see a tiny bit more variation with them; while there are different sizes which is great I can see the same little flaws on each one.

Overall though I think you did a very good job with this piece of art :nod:


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maxthemonkey Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
SWEET!
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Osiris2735 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Man when you gon teach me C4D?
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hampux Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007   Interface Designer
I like the concept! I think it would be cool if you add green reflection on the white text and if you used another picture for the leaves cause now I see that you have resized them. Nice one!
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liveworm Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007   Interface Designer
you need to create a better depth of feild, looks a bit off, and the perspective on the bugs is off too, and what is up with the middle of the R, its white, I thought we should see leaves through the hole.
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yulii Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
that looks pretty cool. will look great on t-shirts :)
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Bugx0r Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
Wow... that's awesome! Just yeah, agree with *Alis86 with the text being too white
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robo-c Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
very fresh I can tell your uni course is helping your work immensely
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Pdgfx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
thats not bad bro
only critique is that the leafs look blurry, and the stocks could be blended better
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dayanmnt Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007
nice =] congrats brow
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Gmarconato Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2007  Professional General Artist
Nice job man! congrats
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